As I sifted through the videos posted on www.storycenter.org/, I couldn’t help but notice how heavy much of the content was. The stories’ themes tackled the difficult loss of a loved one, relocation due to destruction of homes and war, and personal sacrifice. These stories were sad, but with poignant, teachable moments.
The video that struck me the most, the one I chose to reflect upon for this assignment, was entitled “Helpless” by Adrian Nava. I think it hit me the hardest because it was created by a young boy, just a kid, reflecting on the horrors of growing up in a neighborhood that was, as he said, “swarming,” with violence and fear. Whereas many of the digital stories were sobering and sad, this video made me cry because, unlike many other videos, there was no glimmer of hope at the end. No message of a brighter tomorrow. When asked where he would like to live, where he might feel safe, he said that he would have to name a place that is fake, for every place has its problems and the only place in which he could feel safe was in his imagination. And I cried. I cried for the young boy who has given up hope of a safe, happy childhood when he is still just a boy. I cried for the child who has experienced so much fear and violence that he does not believe in the possibility of a home in which he could be out of harm’s way.
This could be a great piece for students when learning about other’s perspectives and the difficulties that children around the world have to endure. This child lives in Denver, CO, not a community that one would commonly associate with violence and oppression. It would be an eye opener for many students who think that these conditions couldn’t exist in their own backyard.
So, as an educator, how would I attempt to assess this piece? As I said, this video was done by a child. His age is not revealed, but you can hear in his voice that he is still quite young. That said, it does state that he had help completing this project through workshops and a community group. Although the description states that he had support in taking the photographs, I’d like to believe that the verbal content of his story is his alone. As a teacher, you could assess this content. Listen for the elements of a good story. Did he create a strong beginning, middle, end? Did he create a hook to grab the audience’s attention? Was his word choice and the overall focus of the piece age appropriate? You could also assess on the visual content. Was the student able to insert the pictures? Did the video flow from image to image in a way that made sense and was pleasing to the eye? Assessing a digital story does not seem to be too different than assessing a story written with pencil and paper. The teacher needs to ensure that all elements of a solid story are still present in the digital format.
Melinda, you hit on a great point when you mentioned the similarities between assessing digital stories and assessing ones written with pen and paper. I think the author makes an excellent point of reminding us that a story is still a story no matter what tools you use to create it and all stories follow a particular pattern.
ReplyDeleteI like that stories tap into the human experience and can get us thinking about our own past experiences that relate to the stories that we hear; there is something connective about it.
I agree the content was SO heavy and not child friendly. Being an elementary teacher, I don't know if I would use this particular site with the children. I even struggled to find a piece that I enjoyed watching. I wish there were some happier tales.
ReplyDeleteI too have found that these stories are touching and inspiring due to this digital storytelling format. You can feel the sadness, joy, and the triumph in these stories. It gives you a different perspective when hearing a story which makes it more affective compared to reading a story. But it is still important that the story is written well.
ReplyDeleteYes, the topic is heavy, but often are their lives. I know that it can be hard to see as a teacher, but I think it important to listen to the truth that they want to express. I think it depends on the reason for the story. Is it to get them to express themselves or to have them write a good story. The first case would mean that doing it gets a good grade. The second should have a good rubric.
ReplyDeleteAs others have mentioned I too thought the stories on the site were very emotional. I believe that digital storytelling allows the reader to get more emotionally involved then they would with just a regular paper book. As you stated, you began crying when you watched the story which made me wonder would you have had the same reaction if you just read the story?
ReplyDeleteMaybe I am asking too much, but, I think the 3-5 mins of DST is not enough. I seem to crave more detail and substance in the short stories. 5-8 mins I think is adequate enough to tell a move poignant and touching story.
ReplyDeleteI liked most of the stories. They share an intimate portrayal of a life.
The more detailed, personal and intimate storylines are the greatest.
The rubric process should not really be exposed to students. The restrictions
would help focus student's topic. The scripted process, as a primary planning tool can help. As teachers, I think we should lead the student to the circle, let them explore it - and make sure the circle is big enough for the students' imagination.